In most countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more available. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In most developed countries, individuals have a tendency to consume fast food and whether this trend has a positive effect on human's life or not remains a highly public continuous discourse. From my personal perspective, despite various benifits that fast food has brought to us, its drawbacks should not be ignored.
On the one hand, the convenience and time - saving capability of fast food are two main factors that help people to adapt with living in a hectic lifestyle. It is undeniable that nowadays many people, especially office staff, are not able to spend much time on enjoying meals, which means that they have to eat quickly and get down to work immediately so fast food is the best option for them. Moreover, people can buy fast food anytime they want. With the development of the Internet, it is much easier to order food online, thereby saving some money for moving. Another important reason is that the tax on fast food is not high so it creates the comfort conditions for people to both purchase their favourite fast food and be suitable for their budget. In most developed countries such as America, the UK, German..., fast food is indispensable and even the recent research has shown the consumption of fast food in these countries has an incredible increase without controlling.
On the other hand, fast food is considered as a major culprit behind the decrease in quality of people's health. Although the favour of fast food is delicious, it is not nutrient and hygienic. It is no doubt to say that fast food do not contain neccessary substance for health like vitamin, fat content of it is really high. Therefore, it is the reason why the rate of people that have heart disease, disabetes, cancer in some countries experience the rapid rise. Furthermore, fast food is not safe because there is no guarentee that it is cooked carefully and no use of toxic substances. When the more fast food is always the choice for every meal in every home, the less people cook at home. Therefore, it also affects badly a part of the cozy atmosphere in family. One study has illustrated that unhealthy eating is top risk for early death in the US and fast food is one of the reasons.
In conclusion, it is of great important that people do not overuse fast food and know how to balance their life with suitable diet. These aforementioned reasons lay an adequate foundation for me to believe that the disadvantages of fast food outweigh its advantages because nothing is more crucial than people's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...her this trend has a positive effect on humans life or not remains a highly public con...
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Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...hoice for every meal in every home, the less people cook at home. Therefore, it also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81105990783 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63426209182 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539170506912 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0303823671 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284995312138 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929026974663 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527218061557 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183046738603 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199258335199 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.