The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For centuries, science have discovered a wide variety of knowledge that has made people's life easier. Proceeding from this an opinion exists that the key to science is innovation and improvement of human life. I completely agree with this statement due to several reasons marked hereinafter.
First of all, the rapid development of science allows people to live in convenient conditions without any thoughts about a place to live, food and other things. The revolution in electronic devices also occupies a great impact on society which helps people save plenty of time. The progression of the internet system also makes a lot of aspects of life simpler. For example, during the pandemic, all schools, universities, and jobs were transferred to online programs such as Zoom, and a large number of companies created their own apps which were very convenient to work with. Thus, science simplifies human life in many ways, freeing up time and increasing opportunities and potential.
Another important thing is discoveries in medicine that provide calm and less nervous existence. This branch of science is one of the key parts of a good life in a community. Medicine never stands still, constantly evolving and improving, which allows society to this day to save lives and prolong them. For instance, in the pandemic described above, thousands of doctors sacrificed their lives saving patients until a vaccine for the virus was invented. Thus, science has made it possible to live an almost full life even for those who have lost any organ after the virus, had it not evolved this would not have been possible.
Taking everything into consideration it can be concluded that the experiments and investigations performed in the course of scientific research sometimes elevate us to new heights of understanding, and subsequently improve human living conditions. This, I firmly believe, encapsulates the true spirit of science.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ed to online programs such as Zoom, and a large number of companies created their own apps which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26213592233 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87184327438 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650485436893 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8533403251 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151179893998 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046744724935 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348055341189 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893258290401 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156897886275 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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