The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.
To what extent do you agree or diasagree
The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.
To what extent do you agree or diasagree
It is accepted that in today’s world a huge amount of people suppose about salary
on their work. I tend to agree with this opinion in this essay I will explain why.
To begin with my position I tend to agree with this opinion because if workers find
sufficient amount of money they can take care of their family. Secondly during the work
time they lose their power and nerve therefore they have well-paid job. Reforming require
adequate money.
Another major plus point of it before applying a job if labourer know how to take good salary
they can work hard on their company or factory. Besides all, everything may happen in life so
sometimes their child want to go park or amausment place in this situation so that they need money. Company gives salary once a month it should be enough to satisfy their needs.
To put it more simply other types of people say that on choosing job we should be attentive on
workplace and staff in one word their claim is true because if you feel bad and unpleasent you are
unable to work as a consequence employer can not increase it may bring some problems like dropping of salary.
To conclude, finding good salary job and thinking about high income is good due to if workers have
well-paid job they can live in another life as they want. Thus I agree with this opinion.
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... can live in another life as they want. Thus I agree with this opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65900383142 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28207158875 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9007032562 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261951040148 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102839366784 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159240063662 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105036851361 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172086155263 0.056905535591 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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