Most people agree that money cannot bring happiness. why is happiness difficult to define? how can people achieve happiness? give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Happiness is a feeling and nobody is able to borrow it. some people think that money is everything while some people opposing this, however, this is impossible to measure happiness because feeling is not countable, in this essay I will discuss this view and how we can achieve it and explain the reason behind that.
happiness is not a commodity we can not able to see it and grab it, it is a feeling many people in this world are rich while some are poor but this can be defined on the basis of money, a rich person who has everything luxurious but he is not able to afford that love, care, and affection because he is alone without a good family he not happy instead of that a poor person who had a family but not too much money but he is happy. this is the reason that money is not everything without money we can afford happiness.
People achieve happiness by setting short term goals and by achieving them, for instance when I was a child I was not good in maths but after practicing using the short goal method I feel happy whenever I solve the questions because it was an achievement for me, do what you want to do without giving any harm to others, it will give you happiness, In my experience, I saw a bagger who is always playing music people giving him coins, sometime the collection was good enough but sometime only few coins but still he is happy because his main source of happiness is singing and playing music. this is the reason for happiness.
Encapsulation, happiness is not affordable, its different for every person, its just a feeling or emotion we can not buy it through money, however, we can achieve it bye doing something special which we want do. In my view happiness can be achieved by giving happiness to other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46728971963 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44952936245 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476635514019 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.44124254 49.4020404114 383% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.25 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.125 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294080244241 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151901807993 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061090953238 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192840489853 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275716697014 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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