Water is a basic necessity of every living being, though some people favoring that they can use water without limitation while others think that it is a non-renewable resource so we have to use it precisely. Now we are witnessing overpopulation and due to that world facing water scarcity so, in my opinion, water should be used with caution in this essay I will discuss both the views and I totally agree to save water rather than wasting it.
Certainly, those whom have more resources that waste them so the anonymous quantity of anything is bad, people who are preferring unlimited use of water are not thinking about the future aspect they never think, If there is a situation of drought, and there is some places people are waiting for drinking water for long hours in ques without any surety. for example in Rajasthan there are places where there is no water for daily purposes and in Maharastra every year there is drought situation faced by the farmers and due that they suicide. so people who are living in rich area where every minute freshwater facility available they only thought this but its overall not good for others.
Secondly, water is a non-renewable resource only 3% out of 70% is useful water which we can utilise in our life, so water is very important Goveronment should have to start some initiative by creating awareness in the people and some punishment for those who are not using it properly and wasting . For instance in Haryana there is government water plant system for different parts of village and there are chairmen for every ward who observe this and anyone find guilty there are 7 days of punishment that particular house water supply cut down.I think this is good step to dter the waste of water secondly government should teach people how to utilise water like rain water harvesting, it will benefit them in future.
In conclusion, excessive use of water may harm the society in future so that government should have to start solution for this and educate people about conservation of water In my point of view school level education about water management is very effective to spread this to society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82162162162 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49019553609 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516216216216 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6448462696 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 223.0 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.25 20.7667163134 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313264528501 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163176234186 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774321296466 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213961017207 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616549913357 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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