In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers are important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers are important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

It is true that the interactions between employers and employees have a great role to play in a business’s success nowadays. While some people claim that other factors are more essential, I believe that good communication in the workplace is the most critical aspect which helps a company taste the fruit of success.
Good interactions result in a more productive and talented workforce. In other words, when managers understand their employees’ talents, they will assign each member in a position he or she can do best that is considered to foster employees’ productivity and special ability. For instance, people who have good communication skills perform more effectively when they work as a client-facing employee instead of an accountant. Therefore, members of staff excel in their fields because of the properly arrangement by managers that may lead to the achievement of more buy-in and rising the company's profit.
Moreover, having strong communication skills leads to an increase in employee engagement and creating better client relationships. It is undeniable that one of the most powerful benefits of good interactions between team members and leaders is engaged employees. In particular, when being trained such skills, employees can connect to other customers better in terms of resolving conflict, understanding the client’s needs, and other customer services. As a result, enterprises will obtain more contracts by offering the best services and are likely to be more successful.
In conclusion, personally, I would argue that a workplace that communicates more effectively establishes a place for its staffs perform productively and showcase their talents as well as strengthen engagement between them which creates greater customer relationships.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6468401487 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30993663778 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9212690698 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212923117587 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804163299053 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745174546526 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140060086413 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820233275535 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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