The number of vehicles increased significantly in the last decads, and the ordinary roads do not serve traveling for long distances anymore. Motorways, on the other hand, alow people to travel quickly and easily, but also they cause some problems which need to be solved.
Despite all the benefits we gain from motorways, they also cause a lot of problems. Firstly, due to the high speed limit in motorways, which is usually above 120 km/hr, many people drive their vehicles at an enormous speed, which gives rise to the risk of road accidents. Secondly, the considerable number vehicles usually end up entering cities that have smaller roads and narrow entrances, and this will lead to traffic congestion. Finally, building and maintaining motorways need a big amount of money, which can be a serious problem for governments.
Building railways can be one of the most effective solutions to traffic congestion. Reducing the number of people who use motorways to travel by encouraging them to use trains instead of cars and buses will reduce traffic congestion and lower the risk of road accidents. Also, maintain motorways frequently can help drivers to drive safely.
In conclusion, the need for transportation and traveling for long distances has become a problem for both people and governments. Motorways alone can not this need anymore. Conversely, it may cause problems, and the people responsible for transportation must find other solutions to overcome these problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27426160338 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83672991693 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57805907173 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4769255532 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294886445063 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107332014787 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641210599563 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183744100251 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509788593025 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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