New editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers.what factors do you think influence these decision? Do we become used to bad news? Would it better if more good news are reported?
The media house bags the responsibility of sensitizing the public; giving current although biased information on the ongoings in a country. Certain factors affect these decisions however, does this change the public's perceptions of good and bad news? this essay will explain these.
Broadcast by the media, has kept the people updated and has influenced certain behaviours in people. This has made the editors a demi god scrutinizing the quality of information to be supplied to the public, thereby escalating the problems of prejudice. Although, certain factors inform their decision such as Government mandate, corruption and ignorance. Certain media editors lack the know-how on news presentation, they would rather participate in forgery than present the actual story, for example, in Nigeria, in the 2014 during the attack on Benue state affecting 6 communties, it was presented that, the attack was wrecked by the Fulani herdsmen meanwhile surviving individuals has it that their attackers never spoke Fulani but Hausa. why are there disparities in the news? Could this be a political propaganda to deviate the people's mind away from the enemy: Boko Haram. In addition to this, a tyrant government may prevent the media from from educating the public about the havoc been wrecked by her in order to avoid an uproar, as news broadcasters as well as journalist are constantly been murdered in the course of action hence, instilling fear.
Moreover, humans are dynamic in nature constantly evolving therefore, no one totally gets used to bad news. When a country constantly produces unfavorable news this will sensitize the general public on the need to be proactive in proffering solutions to these problem and also consequently lead to a better country with improved development.
This only can be achieved if the media editors are open and honest. Statistics show that individuals who are better informed live more productive life than their ignorant counterparts. However, presenting an undiluted information may have its down side such as loosing confidence in the government, or even, adversely fueling the situation but the pros of this always outweighs the cons. Pleasant news help instill hope as well as patriotism.
In summary, news editors shouldn't be allowed the opportunity to alter information. Favorable news and disastrous news should be reported alike as certain news help bring investors into the country as well as NGO's to help solve the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in fact, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32653061224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84499513054 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604591836735 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.5890375913 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169805623207 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586057707825 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455277815706 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102570479871 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027908790109 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.