There is a growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes if temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any revelanvt examples/ experiences
Climate change has over time being a rising global concern and analysts have accused humans for it. Human inputs such as deforestation and industrialization in the quest for modernization are the main culprit of this environmental decay. However, measures to tackle this menace will be proffered.
The recent clamor for modernization in current day world has left the world in a state of environmental insecurity as global temperature rises. Man, in so many ways has consciously and subconsciously adversely affected the natural ecosystem. Firstly, humans have potentiated the process of desertification by tree cutting and bush burnings and by far reducing the proportion of green life whose role is to maintain ecological balance such as humidification and carbondioxide extraction. Secondly, industrial revolution championed by humans, on its own has contributed to greater depletion of the ozone layer by the unabated and unchecked burning of fossils which has immeasurably caused enormous release of co2 which is the cardinal cause of global warming. Asia for instance, was reported the most eco- unfriendly continent of the world following the huge industrial movement witnessed therein in 2005.
“In the face of problems, solutions are not far fetched”; individualistic and governmental approaches will definitely curb the rising global temperatures. On individual grounds, humans should be encouraged and supported to have a green vegetation/ plantation in their respective homes weather in the urban or rural centers. This will promptly overturn the menace caused by deforestation and bush burning. On the governmental levels, policies prohibiting wildfires, open fossil burnings and tree cutting should be enacted and enlightenment done in this regard. However also, regulations promoting green energies such as wind and solar powers will immensely affect the globe positively.
To sum up, activities of modern day man have been implicated in the rising global warmth, nevertheless, green plantations by individuals and eco-friendly policies will counteract these human contributions to environmental decadence as typified by global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80564263323 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35227142187 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608150470219 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3759836699 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147857892921 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498834095127 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290425297143 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926585592962 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115010900703 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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