News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
The individuals who make the decision on what to show on television and display on newspapers are the news editors. This essay will discuss several issues, such as the principal factors that influence the decisions of news editors in broadcasting certain news, whether or not we should embrace the ideology of negative news being reported as a normal thing or the idea that we welcome more positive news to be reported by the media news editors.
One of the major factors that influence news editors decision is the popular nature of the incident, for instance when a particular situation becomes a global phenomenon. As a result, this will attract the attention of news editors because of the worlds interest and will ultimately influence their minds to broadcast the global issues arising on their media platform, that is the television and in the newspapers.
Admittedly, many news editors believe showcasing bad news in their news channels and print media will attract more audience, so they make it a habit. Consequently, the society is constantly being exposed to negative news. This, however is not the proper way to gain followers and popularity. In addition, the public should not see bad news as something normal because it can create confusion and unrest in the society.
To sum up, it is better and crucial for the new editors to select and report good news because it would create a positive image for the society. For instance, broadcasting positive news such as low level of crime, new scientific discoveries and so on, this will invariably attract foreign investments and tourists, hence the benefit of a good societal image.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05494505495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70868656721 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1806405854 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413058432911 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158797737356 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957940875193 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248489995182 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107235478327 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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