People are now-a-days facing many problems due to diminishing resources in the developed cities. Large cities have facing huge problems and they are arduous to the higher authorities in solving them. This essay will explore about the type of tasks facing by the developed cities and the role of the government authorities on the citizens to migrating them.
Firstly, improving technology causes different problems in bigger cities. Most of the population in the country are living in the developed cities. For instance, some of the difficulties in cities now-a-days are “pollution”. Pollution is the biggest obstacle for the government to prevention. Consequently, people in the cities using vehicles leads to air pollution and from the industries causes water pollution and so on. For example, the capital of India, Delhi, suffering huge pollution, yearly, pollution aggrandizes in the city. Not only but also, difficulties like unemployment problem is the one of the biggest threats in so many countries due to bustling in larger cities. Apart from that, diminishing natural resources in the cities also one of the threats. For example, people are digging for underground water everywhere, however, digging at multiple places to satiate heavy population need leads to decreasing water resource.
Furthermore, the government encouraging residents in developed cities to move to small cities and towns. In my perspective, firstly, authorities are encouraging people in cities because development in nearby towns. Secondly, the equal utilization of natural resources in order to prevention from losing the resources. Similarly, for the prevention of unemployment rate in bigger cities. Other than that, in some countries’ government following strict rules in the population of cities because if the highest crime rate. Preventing crime rate from the developed cities due to more population authorities are proposing strict rules and regulations.
In summary, there are many problems in bigger cities, preventing more population is the best way to diminish. Moreover, government planning accordingly to make the developed cities control in the population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64110429448 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06427592912 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469325153374 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6814835739 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.95 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288024630717 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973484434374 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954763637837 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19068689768 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391495278137 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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