The education is the at most significant criteria on the children’s knowledge. Most of the nations have varied thoughts on the beginning age children’s education. This essay will explore about the formal education at four years old and seven or eight years old and considering how far I should agree on that.
Some nations, strongly believe that formal education should begin during the four years of age. Consequently, there are various reasons to start their studies in four years, some acceptable reasons are; the brain developed mostly in the early age of life, most of the cognitive skills aggrandized in small children’s. Apart from that, the children can stored immense of knowledge in early ages. The reading senses are recognized and stored in the brain widely in this period. According to recent survey on neurological system, scientists proposed that children whose ages are below 5 years they have ability to store lot of information than adults. The neurons in the brain regenerate actively and make strong bonds in between neurons. Eventually, they can stored a lot of information and brain ready to accepts huge information.
On the contrast, some nations proposed that education should begin during seven or eight years. Based on this, children should stay with parents while longer or in home, they get enough amount of nutrients and food. Some schools do not offer or provide healthy food, however, they can leads to malnutrition. Even child can expose to parental care for longer periods, and develops great bonding in between them. The records by scientists had shown that people in countries like India, one of the seven children are suffering with malnutrition due to early age schooling. Finally, if the children begin their education in seven or eight they can able to gain more knowledge and protected from various diseases or malnutrition.
In conclusion, the children should begin their education in two different ages in either of this, there is no further complications. Some how it depends on the children mentality and well being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16964285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71122784886 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9587265909 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355619402358 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103465318244 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723234391923 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215444636975 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770829607592 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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