Nowaday many people are diagnosed the anorexia? What are the causes and solutions ?
In recent years, anorexia-related the diagnosis has become an issue of broad interest in the general public. Albeit, generally noticeable issue, humans have not realized impacts of this problem. Discussed below are several causes and methods for the phenomenon mentioned above.
First and foremost, stress and strain of a busy modern life are responsible for the anorexia. Paradoxically, in the jet age of the 21st century, human beings always are put under tons of burdens such as job, finance and social as well as private relationship, thereby leading to the fact that they are likely to undergo depression and anxiety, and reality skipping the meals can be avoidable. Gradually, this habit poses the anorexia. Anecdotal evidence has shown that a vast majority of blue-collar workers contract this illness and disease.
What is more, technology-related breakthroughs and developments can be seen as a cause of the anorexia. Obviously, humans in walks of life are attracted by advanced technology day in and day out. Surprisingly, a young generation has spent a huge amount of time with their eyes glued to games, social networking, and sophisticated devices, and think little of the meals. Therefore, the anorexia gradually grows that humans have yet to think about it.
Unknowing or knowingly, there is a wide range of measures and methods, which has the potential to tackle this issue. To begin with, it is imperative that homo sapiens should balance between work and life for a sake of the fact that only when humans'mental health satisfies, are their one's physical health good. Another solution is that taking advantages of the power concerning the media offers an assistance to humans to raise the awareness of the destructive effects of technology, especially the anorexia, which stands out like a sore thumb.
In the light of these facts, it seems obvious that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short-term; however, I believe that the measures outlined above would prevent as well as deter humans from the anorexia by dint of a fruitful and contended life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91076556694 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614492753623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9336221832 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129126758461 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444685099603 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519455239657 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675037642343 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210295498075 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.