Nowadays animal experiment are widely used to develop new medicine and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated. Animals are also helpful for maintaing biosphere. The given topic asserts that should experiments on animals for safety and for new medicines; are banned or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of the argument there are people who believe that experiments on animals should be restricted. There is many assertions in defence such as loss of biodiversity. According to these people, some animals died due to the experiments. For instance is Survey was conducted conducted by the Delhi University, in which all the animals were died due to the experiment; with the help of this new medicines of Cancer will be found. Furthermore, we have no right to harm the animals because they have their own right to live.
On the flip side, there are some people who believe that experiments should be taken on animals because it is beneficial for human being. They bolster the view point by claiming that with the help of these experiments scientists easily test the medicine; and made decision about that. They further referred to example of a cancer person, who is suffer from this problem and take medicine from hospital; which is tested on animals. After taking this medicine he became fit and enjoy his life.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands it has many advantages instead of disadvantages, but it is beneficial for human being to stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86572438163 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63917622718 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6461121366 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274468797269 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957394523224 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756583982189 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155545175907 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725909489695 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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