Nowadays, using animals for experiments is very common in any worldwide laboratory years after years. Animal such as mouse have been used a lot to research and testing new medicines before the product is widely publicize to people. Hence, I agree that animal experiments are very benefits to our life.
Firstly, some people argue that testing medicine on animals is wrong and even inhumanity because animals can even die during the test, some will be unhealable afterward. Moreover, in some countries, people pet animals such as mouse and turtle or even snake. And it is reasonable why they forcibly discourage using animals as experiment products.
In other hand, looking at the bright side, even the discouraged community also need treatment when they got sick and most of the medicines they used from now were tested on animals in laboratory to assure that people can safely using the products. And now we unfortunately don’t have anything to replace the duties of animals in the lab. Even scientist can kill some laboratory animals but they can also help people in the long run, and find out a way to cure some diseases such as cancer, etc.
In conclusion, I think animal experiments are not really fair for animals which have to suffer the chemistry just because these animals are easily to breed. But if we need to figure out new treatments for the new diseases nowadays, scientists have to take not a test but hundred tests before scientists proclaim the test to public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'publicized'.
Suggestion: publicized
... medicines before the product is widely publicize to people. Hence, I agree that animal e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cure some diseases such as cancer, etc. In conclusion, I think animal experiment...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... scientists have to take not a test but hundred tests before scientists proclaim the te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93625498008 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56493887761 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3774185278 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.636363636 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390760336641 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155271176199 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672713589812 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244823090701 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587351062891 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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