In today's world, machine engineering is being utilized to navigate cars. This is due to the advancement in technology and it should be seen as a positive development because it helps the handicapped individuals to be independent and self-reliant. In this essay, I will elaborate my opinion about benefits of developing automated technology.
First and foremost reason is that the people rely on machines, because of the latest development in the machine learning. This is due to the fact that most of the persons are connected to the Internet and having big data, which means that algorithm can learn basic task. As a result, software does not need to be programmed but it can acquired knowledge from million of other devices around the world. For instance, Tesla cars now come with autopilot, which drives car by using data from other Tesla cars which is shared.
Furthermore, there are plethora of utilization of automatically driving car and one of them is to help unabled person in navigating car and made them self-dependent. In addition to this, they can do their own without any training to learn such heavy vehicles, which is indeed a biggest relief for such unabled persons. For illustrate, a U.S. based scientist, Stewan Hawkins was totally on wheel chair, inspire of that he was able to drive his Carrie to automated technology.
Hammering the final nail, I pen down saying that technology empower the strength of unable person by allowing them independent and self-reliant, without doing any extra course, due to automation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, so, as to, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06299212598 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89963770423 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0997564277 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.909090909 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170451746146 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641898074975 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489728347202 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993893154221 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855696518816 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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