Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the recent era, due to the revolution of technology the contemporary lifestyle has changed than the pastime. Due to the availability of new advanced features devices, not only the elderly people but also the young have also been addicted to these gadgets which hamper them both physically and mentally. I completely agree with the statement.
On the one hand, handheld devices with their countless applications, entertainment options, and always the presence at our fingerprints disconnect us from the stress of reality and avoid us engaging with them. Therefore, when we face any difficulties we easily fall into frustration as a consequence of lack of insufficient emotional exercise our behavior pattern has changed a lot. For example, a recent survey shows that teenagers and young adults who spend more than 10 hours on the internet, 56% reported unhappiness that who spend less time on the internet. Moreover, research shows that more use of smartphones responsible for more emission of cortisol-stress the hormone which increases anxiety and mental stress.
Furthermore, excessive usages of these devices create an impairment of logical thinking. In addition, problem-solving skills also decrease a lot. The body's immune power also weakening gradually, therefore, it expedites the growth of various diseases in our body. For instance, due to this way of life people do not do exercise regularly, as a result, the number of diabetics affected people increasing day by day. What's more, these gadgets make them isolated and feel lonely which affects them psychologically.
In conclusion, to sum up, all the points above, it is clear that, in the long run over usage of mobile phones, can make a harmful effect on the children mentally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30215827338 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02469007746 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654676258993 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0201259743 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10699389981 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345610878591 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029921212924 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573147625658 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358454236409 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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