Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for this trend.
These days, some parents tend to send their children to go to study abroad. Despite some disadvantages for this trend, I do believe that the benefits can far outweigh these drawbacks.
On one hand, there are a number of major positive aspects for students who have an educational system from another countries. A first immense advantages is that the children can develop their independent ability. This means that these children will learn how to cook, wash dishes and other stuffs by themselves. Without their parents, they also have to find a part-time job to make ends meet and learn the money management.
Another important positive aspect is that studying abroad enhances the children’s employment prospects. Needless to say, if a person has a degree from a higher educational system with a high standard rather than their original country, it is possible for them to have a decent job with a worth salary. In fact, many companies tend to recruit and prioritise people with a global outlook.
A final advantage for this trend is that living in another country help them gain the broader view of life and different cultures. This means that these children will always consider or evaluate a situation or a phenomenon in different ways of thinking.
In certain situations, however, if the children live without their parental supervision, it is easy for them to have an unhealthy and a harmful life such as drugs-taking or drinking. This is a major drawback for sending childrens to study abroad.
To sum up, even there is a drawback for this situation, I still do believe that in this modern time, studying in another country is a best educational process and would be a positive experience for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, still, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97909407666 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74915762451 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2151711834 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261546797827 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933295569344 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632543295734 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143102289042 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416247462994 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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