It is true that, in this contemporary era, people are living far away from their families for earning money, education and so on. Furthermore, nowadays families are not so close as in the past they used to live. Additionally, we would discuss some reasons and show what is the effect of this on society?
To commence with, there are overabundance points on this. First and foremost is declining closeness among families members. Parents have to do lots of work and they want to take rest after spending long hours in office and also they want to live their own life without any interference. Moreover, smartphone are used for suffering internet by them rather than giving their leisure time on their parents or children. Another reason could be, migration are being done by many masses from small villages to metropolitan cities due to earning money or for education. Eventually, they prefer to give less concentration on their families. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 58% of Indian youth are living far away from their families.
Looking on the effect on societies, children are not getting love of their parents and they believe that their parents have no more time so heinous steps are taken by them like kidnapping, murders, robbery and so on. Secondly, internet is being used by people and they are adoring to make friends in virtual world that is why they do not have more confidence to talk with face to face with anyone else.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, we have advanced technology and everything in this modern era and we do not need anything yet, we must understand that families play an indispensable role in everyone life. Additionally, nobody can love more than our families. It impacts our societies as well but if we understand about our responsibilities and start giving our leisure time on our loved ones. we can easily change these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ing our leisure time on our loved ones. we can easily change these problems.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90461538462 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72837554895 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4187683042 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231997950314 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745499539641 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677738075034 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15015243927 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983260697245 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.