Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society? (November 2019, USA)
There is a school of thought that most of the individuals would like to enjoy their married life and raising family at the age of 30 rather than at their teenage time.To my mind, I am of the firm believe that the disadvantages of this tendency will outweigh the advantages.
To begin with, the benefits will only belong to anybody who chooses to have a late marriage but not the whole society. It is clearly seen that those people will have a long period of time devoting to their career and squandering their own money in preference. To be more precise, people usually hold the thought that they cannot bring back the youth, so that they have to live to the fullest and are not ready for a serious relationship. As a result, the population pyramid will be negatively affected due to the fact that the number of infants are born early will gradually decrease.
Moreover, a late marriage will also be detrimental to the education of a society. Those children who were born by the 30-to-40-year-old parents may not be more intelligent than the ones born earlier. Based on scientific fact, their brains will not function quickly and cannot catch up with their friends. Furthermore, teenagers whose moms and dads are getting old will have to look after themselves at the early age. Therefore, the entire community may be full of innocent, naive and incompetent employees or workers - those who are not well-trained and leaded by their guardians.
In conclusion, notwithstanding with the brilliant idea of rearing a family in 30 years old will have a wide range of advantages, I still align myself with the notion that the downsides might be greater than the upsides of this issue. It is suggested that getting marriage when we are still healthy and energetic will bring the best immune system for babies, which also benefits the future of a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Suggestion: period
...seen that those people will have a long period of time devoting to their career and squanderin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71941622584 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564263322884 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0620051345 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229605288174 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806297132522 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353365516173 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138007362011 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267988197296 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.