Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
The issue of marriage age has grown in importance over the past decades. I personally agree with the idea that the trend of getting married at the age of thirty and then having children is beneficial for societies in the future, and I will express my opinion throughout this essay.
First of all, it can be quite beneficial for societies if their young citizens have more time to spend on studying and working. Due to the fact that people can benefit from the ages before the thirty to pursue their academic qualification so as to improve their career prospects. If they do so they are more likely to have a well-paid job and a superior source of income for their families in the future. Having satisfying careers and better revenues leads to welfare for families that encompass children, and because of that, parents are able to provide their children with a better education. As a result of higher education, children are more likely to not only become successful citizens but also can improve societies.
Secondly, because people at the age of thirty tend to think more intellectually for their future, they mostly become successful in their marriages. From a social perspective, people who have got married at the age of thirty their marriages are lasting more than those who have got married at younger ages and have children. Owing to the fact that when couples who have children get divorced, their children would be deprived of the full educational supervision of their parents. Thus, they might find it difficult to pursue their education so they will remain illiterate or pass grades with low marks. Therefore, people should get married at the age of thirty in order to avoid this problem because people with higher academic qualifications can be more beneficial for societies.
Due to the mentioned reasons above, I would argue that people should get married at the age of thirty and then have children because it will bring benefits to societies in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89583333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58788276168 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.1269885621 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398095774476 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148047484773 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07799920495 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25543281856 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400311807627 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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