Some people believe that uniforms at work places are not necessary Do you agree or disagree with it

Essay topics:

Some people believe that uniforms at work places are not necessary. Do you agree or disagree with it?

The issue of wearing uniforms has grown in importance over the past decades. Some people argue that uniforms not required at the workplace. However, I believe uniforms are required at the workplace.

Wearing uniform at the workplace boost the productivity of workers. From a psychological standpoint, since they look like each other in terms of clothes, they are more likely to be focused on what they do compared with when they are in their clothes. Being more focused on work leads to a higher rate of productivity among workers. The PEC company which is one of the leading manufacturers in the UPS industry, for instance, compelled the worker of the company to wear uniforms at the workplace. Consequently, after a year, the rate of productivity experienced dramatic growth.

Furthermore, employees in some careers are known in society by their uniforms such as policeman and firefighter. Some jobs for showing their employees in society are required to compel them to wear uniforms. Thus, people can recognize them easily among others. Owing to this quick recognition, they can do what they are responsible for not only more comfortable but also quicker. To cite an example, city dwellers are more likely to recognize a firefighter once they are in special uniforms.

Due to the reasons mentioned above, I would argue that I oppose the statement that wearing uniforms is not necessary.

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Average: 6.3 (2 votes)

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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, well, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17543859649 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89238008794 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55701754386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3513379811 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211353815545 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806218737668 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736836812032 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133157534803 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674620224344 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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