Nowadays it seems that almost all websites show online advertisements from other companies for products or services.
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
In modern times, the usage of internet is getting increasingly popular across the globe and a lot of commercials are
published alongside in most of the webpages. Although these advertisements help visitors in choosing their products,
there are a lot of detrimental effects that can cause to people. This essay will discuss more in detail about the views.
Firstly, when online users visit various websites they easily get distracted by seeing the adverts displayed.
They will not be able to focus on the main content and get lured to sign up for some expensive items.
For instance when some one is looking to find natural ways to reduce hair fall or cure acne they get diverted by
enrolling to a herbal beauty clinic, thereby ending up losing their hard earned money and have not explored the actual things.
Secondly, the younger generation will also be misleaded by the online placard as they tend to buy video games
and mobile apps while browsing internet for academic purpose. Therefore, the advertisements should be
strictly avoided so that it will help the people not to shift their central idea.
A further reason to be wary of this idea is the Privacy aspect. There is always a threat that some one is tracking
the personal content by exhibiting items of our interest. Furthermore there is a possibility of banking details getting
stolen without our notice. For example if a person is viewing a sports website and gets an advertisement related to
gambling or casino, he will be attracted towards it and enters card details which might possibly end up in scam
and will cause serious loss to his finance.
To conclude, public should be mindful while accessing the online forums as these distractors will be vulenerable
to their savings and confidential details. I feel the organsation that governs the website has to enforce strict
laws on content owners not to encourage the advertisers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.065830721 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66013274988 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617554858934 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1626999828 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085587472996 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302577109673 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197264311224 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0263903526757 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270462998137 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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