Nowadays, a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The question regarding the appropriateness of different content towards youngsters has always been debatable in all the societies. Currently, an abundance of commercial targeted at children ought to be prohibited due to the adverse consequences. I completely agree with this statement and believe that harmful advertising that can affect children must be removed.
Firstly, children become obsessed with some of the content they watch during commercial breaks. This means that offspring may manipulate their parents to purchase diverse products and services that the former see on the screen. Therefore, some content is not fit to children owing to the fact that they are manipulative towards their parents. For example, according to Russian University of Sociology, 67 per cent of parents are not able to provide their children with the most of their requests. In other words, children’s appetites are considered to be difficult to satisfy.
Secondly, the young ones are regarded as the most vulnerable demographics of society. Proceeding from this, various contents that they grasp from the Television poses a huge threat to them. Therefore, limiting children from excessive exposure to TV can be a sound idea. Moreover, the government and large broadcasting corporations have to do their best to restrict certain advertising. Thus, amid the most threatening activities that children can encounter, advertising should not be underestimated.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the idea that advertising on TV has to be regulated and controlled; hence children are sensitive to most of the content they consume from the screen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... Firstly, children become obsessed with some of the content they watch during commercial br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54581673307 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08622766393 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6834327528 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169392513607 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611271250867 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053053733213 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112447897228 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301399263141 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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