Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
In all times an individual’s salary has been the most important value in each person’s life. However, nowadays, huge salaries are considered much more essential than pleasure from work. I totally agree with the opinion that well-paid jobs are better than satisfaction from work.
Firstly, with huge amount of money is earned, a human can let themselves to purchase anything that their brains can imagine. In other words, these high-paying jobs provide a financial independence and freedom from worries. Therefore, if a person wants to lead such life, they have to work hard, everyday without any weekends. For example, scientists have established that every person who is working without weekends and improves themselves everyday usually achieves success faster and better than somebody else. Thus, such a job bestows a human a perfect way of life without concerns regarding work.
Secondly, such salaries reveal opportunities to connect with enormously powerful people, such as businessmen and authorities. It means that, if such individual has got into trouble their friends will render some aid to this person. For instance, I have a friend with really powerful friends from the top of the world and he had a trouble, his company had become bankrupt and these friends supported him and now his company is doing well. Hence, such wages provided to such a person decent friends and that can help in unexpected situations.
To conclude, I strongly agree with the statement that such salaries are much more vital than usual satisfaction from the job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ithout weekends and improves themselves everyday usually achieves success faster and bet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70007111017 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3496482746 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198074617477 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796817060809 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104458528202 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180691056456 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146097780883 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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