Children are influenced by their friend’s opinions. In what ways are children affected by their friends?
How can parents make sure this influence is positive?
Human beings’ perception and mindset have always been affected by people who surround them. Children experience influence by the ideas and viewpoints of their friends. Close friends tend to impose their wishes and goals on each on another. Therefore, parents are to monitor who their offspring communicate with.
Individuals exchange their ideas with their circle of friends and youngsters are no exception. Sometimes being exposed to other people’s views and ideology can entail catastrophic consequences. This means that if children devote too much time to their friends they are prone to contract harmful and toxic mentality. Hence the negative seeds derived from the children’s friends may be planted into a child’s brain, which in its turn can undermine their life. For example, according to Russian University of Criminology most of juvenile delinquency is perpetrated after some significant influence by other people. In other words, constant interaction with adverse social elements leads to serious outcomes.
Parents’ primary responsibility is to ensure their children are safe not only physically, buy also mentally. Proceeding from this, it may be beneficial to learn about their offspring’s social circle. Moreover, children are considered to lack maturity in the process of selecting their friends. In other words, due to insufficient life and interrelation experience children ought to share the most vital information with their mothers and fathers. However, parents should not be strict towards their children while approving the latter’s friend list.
In conclusion, owing to the nature of humans, we are extremely susceptible to the thoughts of others. Furthermore, children come under influence especially severe. Therefore, the main duty of parents is to control and check persons who their children make friends with.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: Being Sometimes
...riends and youngsters are no exception. Sometimes being exposed to other people’s views and ide...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...o contract harmful and toxic mentality. Hence the negative seeds derived from the chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70863309353 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90530151187 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9812966916 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438473951567 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136078109408 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869400825985 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281054188363 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100969105457 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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