Many people think that having more money will make them happier.
How important is money to happiness?
In all times money has been the most important aspect in people’s life. Nowadays enormous amount of humans believe that a bank account with infinite reserve of money is a key to be happy. I totally agree with the idea that money provides happiness.
Firstly, when human has a huge amount of money-this will lead to a better life. It means that this a person is going to relax till the end of their life, travel all around the world, meet new people and enjoy the life. In addition, this individual can aid people who are in need. Thus, money is a way to live and enjoy the improved life, and also you may provide aid to destitute people.
Secondly, money leads to a wealthy life, where a human can buy everything. This means that exorbitantly expensive goods are accessible to you and you can purchase them in any time you want. According to this, this human is going to have the most perfect life with a lot of superb things. Therefore, money is a key to be wealthy and happy, with perfect houses, luxury cars and interesting experiences in life.
To conclude I would say that reaching this type of life is considered very hard, and you have to opt to overwork everyday, have no time on yourself, only when you leave something behind, you will gain something new.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55652173913 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40063003703 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1993797149 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176736182235 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792949446642 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480025371664 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117591349053 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490921617088 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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