Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems
People from rural areas and small towns have always moved to bigger cities in search of better living conditions and employment. This trend is the main reason for rapid population growth that has caused several issues in modern cities. This essay will discuss problems associated with overpopulation and propose some viable solutions to it.
To begin with, one of the major difficulties that cities have to cope with is poor housing. The influx of newcomers to megapolises is an inevitable process nowadays, so there is an increased demand for accommodation. Obviously, migrants and local residents need quality housing, but the government cannot guarantee this amenity. This is because the houses are often built in the shortest possible time from poor quality materials. According to the statistics, only 13% of world's cities can provide citizens with affordable accommodation. Thus, a large number of middle- and low-income people live in run-down areas because dwellings in presentable residential areas are usually overpriced.
To tackle the above-mentioned issue, both governments and individuals are to undertake certain measures. Talking about the former, they should implement renovation programs that include demolition of substandard buildings and money allocation from the city budget for the construction of high-quality housing. The latter are also able to control this situation. For instance, they can put pressure on the authorities by signing up petitions or interacting with them directly. Thereby, thanks to a joint effort, the state and the residents will find a resolution to the issue of accommodation shortage.
To conclude, this essay has reviewed the problem related to overcrowding in urban areas and suggested possible solutions to it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59851301115 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02201903567 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646840148699 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5949363031 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138327133223 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408720188482 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493929268376 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913448384848 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472161111614 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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