Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
It is common knowledge that the world, together with its population, keeps growing day by day. At some time, a specific region becomes too densely populated, and it is called overpopulation. These days, it has occurred in urban areas and resulted in some detrimental consequences. This essay will mainly discuss these problems and propose some possible solutions to them.
Several social problems can arise from overpopulation. Pollution is the one that foremostly stands out. The more residents there are, the more people have private transport. It explains why people can easily find polluted air and loud noise in overpopulated areas, and it has negative impacts on human physical and mental health. Air contaminated with dirt, dust and exhaust fumes makes people suffer from respiratory diseases. Besides air pollution, when there are traffic congestions, time-consuming travelling is also annoying. In addition, noise pollution is disturbing to their private mental relaxation time. An additional issue is the rising cost of living and unemployment rate. The reason why this problem occurs lies in that there is only a limited amount of work in a region. More residents mean fewer opportunities of having a job, which also means that the difference in the living standard between the moneymakers and the unemployed expands. It creates a high rate of crime, and it, as well as the rising cost of living, makes life difficult and insecure for people.
Facing those problems, governments and individuals can reduce them with several strategies. The first thing to do is to enhance the overall quality and reliability of public transport. Governments can increase the number of bus routes, buy more buses and improve the staff's capability. It is advisable because it ensures people's belief in people. Besides, it is recommendable that taxes on petrol and car sale be imposed higher so that the growth of own car mobility will gradually decrease. Another sensible solution is to enforce new laws to restrict the immigration of people from small towns and the countryside. By doing this, the population density of different regions will be approximately even.
In conclusion, overpopulation cannot be denied to seem impossible to be fully eliminated. Nevertheless, there are still concrete steps to tackle it and make our society a better and more convenient place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'staffs'' or 'staff's'?
Suggestion: staffs'; staff's
... routes, buy more buses and improve the staffs capability. It is advisable because it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96294406646 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.132241589 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.25 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137378875818 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033930747876 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461427032897 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701334395032 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205221712006 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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