Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The environmental issue currently raising the most concern among human beings is open to debate. Although the extinction of various species of flora and fauna seems the most urgent, there are other more pressing environmental matters from my perspective.
According to some people, reduced biodiversity is worthy of serious consideration for the devastating consequences it may trigger unless prevented or solved in time. An environmental aspect it can detrimentally influence is ecological balance, the closest biological term to biodiversity. Suppose the number of some particular species in the ecosystem decreases significantly. In that case, it will not be able to recover, leading to the degradation of other related species through food chains, making the whole system degraded. Furthermore, another factor that the gradual loss of species can affect is human beings since we are also a part of the vast global ecosystem. For human development, plants and animals play a vital role as a great source of food and medicine for daily life, a diverse source of raw materials for industries, and an excellent source of genes for scientific research. Therefore, the extinction of many species of flora and fauna can create extreme food insecurity, make millions of people have difficulty finding health treatment, and cause industries and biosciences to struggle.
However, there are still other more severe environmental matters that are in urgent need of solutions, specifically climate change and pollution. Climate change, mutually related to global warming, is the permanent transformation of the climatic system that may last for millions of years, and it is currently having detrimental influences on the environment and human life. Among the long-term outcomes cited are the appearance of the ozone hole, the gradual rise of sea level, the complicated change in the weather pattern and the more frequent occurrence of acidic rains and natural disasters. On the other hand, pollution, the issue of the natural environment being contaminated and having its features change adversely, is putting pressure specifically on human development day by day. People nowadays may experience air pollution causing respiratory diseases, water pollution detrimentally impacting fishing activities or soil pollution reducing the amount of land available for agriculture. There is also noise pollution which can negatively affect human hearing and result in sleep disorders, visual pollution which may create a sense of life insecurity and other types of pollution that can confuse human daily life and production.
In conclusion, though declined biodiversity may be a pressing issue, other problematic environmental matters, including climate change and pollution, are getting more severe and demanding more urgent solutions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2397.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0692077131 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550588235294 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9294683541 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.8125 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5625 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136196383734 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503535751899 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362607776585 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959578037137 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275601673271 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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