Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability while others believe that there are more important factors involved in success in sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Views vary on whether an athlete's physical talent or several other factors contribute the most to his achievements. From my perspective, to have a thriving sports career, one not only should obtain a well-based physique but also needs other elements, particularly mental strength and the mastery of skills.
On the one hand, physical prowess undeniably plays a vital role in sports achievements in competitions since the essence of sports is enhancing strength, including stamina and muscle flexibility. The more physical strength an athlete can build up, the higher possibility of surpassing their competitors he may have. Contests of individual sports, such as marathons, golf, boxing and swimming, can be good examples to illustrate this point. To explain more specifically, although those competitions require power from different body parts (mainly arms or legs), all reach the same consensus that only those with the best physical conditions can gain victory.
On the other hand, besides physical ability, other factors also contribute to success in sports. One of them has to be mental endurance. It appears to be a fact that not every athlete takes part in a match in a particular competition with the best health. His physique might have injuries caused in the previous rounds, which is not beneficial to his performance. At this point, his mental toughness is critical as it would help the athlete temporarily forget about the pain to maintain the best performance. In addition, skill mastery is essential to a victory in a sports competition and even a successful sports career. People often think that those with ideal physiques continuously use the skills they learn fluently, but it seems inaccurate when an athlete cannot control the body without rhyme or reason. Therefore, practising skills should be aligned with building good physical conditions instead of being neglected.
In conclusion, the two viewpoints mentioned above are rational, and I think that success in sports should be a combination of physical prowess and other factors, including mental toughness and the mastery of skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an athlete' or simply 'athletes'?
Suggestion: an athlete; athletes
Views vary on whether an athletes physical talent or several other factor...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... mastery is essential to a victory in a sports competition and even a successful sport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33933933934 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89590091301 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7246230246 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.533333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171644111245 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613860908092 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065963236948 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116137915637 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170210357821 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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