People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve these problems?
Many people are living longer and longer after retirement, which leads to many issues and, therefore, can be solved with some measures.
One of the problems that arise from the longer expectancy of the elderly is the increase in the portion of the population in need of government financial assistance, as it appears true for some retired employees that they have difficulty sustaining themselves for the course of their retirement, particularly from one to two years after they stop working. This requires much money from taxpayers to provide pensions for them, being an adverse impact on the country's economy. More people having longer life after retiring also put the medicine of countries under pressure, specifically happening in those whose healthcare system is underfunded but overburdened. Once again, more money, especially from taxes, will need to be directed towards dealing with this, which is to the detriment of national funding.
To alleviate issues associated with the trend of longer life expectancy after retirement, there are several solutions. Initially, employees and their employers ought to have preparations for their finance for retirement during their working time. Businesses should make financial contributions to their workers' retirement plans. Employees, besides, had better start saving, simply with a piggy bank or a personal saving fund, to secure their fulfilling future. Furthermore, longer lives mean better health conditions to continue working longer. Therefore, governments can increase the retirement age or allow partial pension payments if elderly people want to continue working with a part-time job.
In conclusion, although that people nowadays are living longer after retirement has undeniable unfavourable influences, several solutions can be implemented to reduce them to better society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68727272727 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85607602279 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0774022384 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26381693741 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09270198373 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745050761264 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183258425892 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510067525376 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.