Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Urban cities are cited as hot spots for providing mammoth of job opportunities and necessary life amenities to the public, attracting a big percentage of the population. while people in rural areas live in a harmonious ambiance, the population of urban places has been facing not only the lack of affordable housing but also fed up from the polluted environment. It is high time to recapture the sense of harmony of urban life by working at individual and governmental levels.
Since more people are moving to cities, it is not uncommon to see that there is a scarcity of cheap dwelling places but also it is not surprising to find the roads blocked with vehicles. Firstly, owing to the less place to construct more houses in urban areas, the rents of buildings are increasing rapidly as the high-rise buildings of cities require exorbitant maintenance fees. Statics demonstrate that an inevitable result of overpopulation has increased the number of slum areas in the cities as compared to the countryside. In addition, the populace of cities has to live in a contaminated atmosphere. As more and more people are going to cities, the number of factories emitting poisonous liquids, and vehicles emitting hazardous gaseous pollution have been increasing relentlessly. As a consequence, the health of residents of cities is getting deteriorated day by day. To cite an example, people who live in cities suffer more from breathing-related diseases such as asthma, whereas due to fresh and pollution-free air in the countryside a negligible number of people have such problems.
These severe complications of overpopulation in cities have to tackle with war-footing measures on a number of levels. Firstly, government authorities need to take responsibility to provide all the facilities of cities in the rural areas, keeping most of the population out of city centers. By establishing new factories on the countryside, they could be able to provide employment to job seekers and thus not attracting unemployed people to move to the city center. Also, this strategy would diminish the pollution level in urban areas, which in turn lead to healthier citizens. Secondly, as responsible citizens, we ought to corporate with our government in tackling this issue by being contended with rural amenities and not to be in the rat race of luxurious city life. Also, individuals can lend unwavering support to the government by not shifting to cities with whole families. Only earning hand can go to the city to find employment by leaving the whole family back in the village.
As shown above, the strategies outlined above can do much to reverse the activities of overpopulation that threaten the city life, which has wreaked havoc by limiting affordable housing and enhancing environmental pollution. It is now time to address the situation. If we do not do this, we have to see city life becoming worse in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 91.0 41.998997996 217% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2601.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 504.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16071428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09461163278 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 839.7 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9595559502 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.227272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188455904029 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686405983293 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136184889538 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1893804494 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213836968299 0.056905535591 376% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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