You recently joined a sports club and are having some problems. Write to the manager and include
Why you joined the club
The problems you are having
Some possible solutions
Reported IELTS Exam/Test on February 24th
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing concerning the complications I have been facing in your sports club that I just joined two weeks ago. The main purpose of joining the club is to gain guidance from a professional instructor for competing on the international level as a bodybuilder.
I am having concerns about the service provided by your staff members. Even though a trainer has been assigned to me, he already has enough number of people to train. Whereas, it is necessary to get proper attention to physical workout and a dietary requirement from an instructor to be a competitive bodybuilder. Besides, he often comes late which also affects my schedule as I have adjusted club timings according to my work.
I would suggest if you could reduce the number of students in one section so that I would be able to get enough guidance from him. Also, I appreciate it if you could advise him to be punctual to allow us to utilize the assigned time sufficiently.
I look forward to a swift resolution to this matter.
Yours faithfully
Bal
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81767955801 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89576558432 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0510923696 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160909254413 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513384044446 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521930716378 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083642235141 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694054058225 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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