In some areas of the US a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays in many countries a curfew in imposed for teenagers. In the USA it also exists, in which teens are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
I hold the same point of view. To my mind, it a wise decision to introduce a ‘curfew’ for children. First of all, night is not a time when children can have fun and walk somewhere else. To add, teenagers are minors, who cannot be responsible for their acts especially at the night. Likewise, at this time teenagers should do their homework, relax from hard school day and also sleep. Nowadays education pays an important role in society, it is a e… of social mobility. So children should spend their spare time for learning something especially at the evening or night. Furthermore, curfure can protect teenagers from drug use and prostitution that awake at the night.
As I know, in Russia and Uzbekistan a curfew is also imposed for children. In Russia Federation parents can get administrative violation or a fine if their minor children walk out after 8 pm. Teenagers can go out of doors after this time only if they are accompanied by an adult.
However, teenagers do not support this opinion. They are agaist curfew. Children always think that they are old enough and can do everything they want. To my mind, in the future these teenagers will understand that it is a right decision.
In conclusion, I would like to say, that I support government’s decision about curfew. Night is not time when teenagers can hang around.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76383763838 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75197598505 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0813168837 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9473684211 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388887790719 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115216285171 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120597318945 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238250047513 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139072988338 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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