The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph indicates the quantity of packages that were transported by two large postal companies between 1920 and 2000.
There are two clear trends in the data. Firstly, two companies the Federal Express and the TNT Mail Services demonstrated a consistent rise in delivery during the first 25 years. In addition, from the beginning a transportation of the Federal Express had soared up approximately to 23 000 of parcels in 1935 and reached the highest rate during the all period. Moreover, it can be seen that the Federal Express’s delivery plummeted down roughly to 12 000 in 1960 and acquired practically the same result as the TNT Mail Services. However, then The trend was slightly increasing till 1980 and remained steadily at the level of 17 000 packages by 2000.
By contrast, the number of parcels transported by the TNT Mail Services was continuously growing from the beginning before drop in 1970. Nevertheless, a delivery of this company rocketed nearly up to 22 000 in 1990 and gained the elevated result of 24 000 parcels in 2000.
Overall, the TNT Mail Services’ delivery demonstrated gradually upward tendency, whereas the Federal Express trend was constantly rising and falling throughout the all period.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15841584158 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86385175897 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569306930693 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2550510595 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.777777778 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 4.34317383033 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145850457974 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668241300897 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348798525771 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950760089277 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341251872668 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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