Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
In all times your salary has been the most important value in each person life. However, nowadays,huge salaries much more essential than pleasure from work. I totally agree with the opinion that well-paid jobs are better than satisfaction from work.
Firstly, with huge amount of money individual can let himself to buy anything that his brains can imagine. In other words these well paid jobs give a financial independence and freedom from worries. Therefore, if person wants to have such life he has to work hard, everyday without any weekends. For example, scientists has found out that every person who is working without weekends and improves himself everyday usually achieve success faster and better than somebody else. Thus, such job gives to a human a perfect way of life without worries regarding his work.
Secondly, such salaries open up opportunities to connect with enormously powerful people, such as businessmen’s and authorities. It means that, if such individual has got into trouble his friends will give some aid to him. For instance, I have a friend with really powerful friends from the top of the world and he had a trouble, his company has become bankrupt and these friends gave aid to him and now his company doing well. Hence, such wages provides to such person decent friends and that can help in unexpected situations.
To conclude, I strongly agree with the statement that such salaries is much more vital than usual satisfaction from the job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59825975785 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.181785959 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3076923077 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195521177775 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806758220405 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10558249964 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18268977094 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147783965879 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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