In some places of the world, people are tried to control by imposing different rules and regulations from the government side or in some cases by the society itself. Some people may claim this practice healthier, while others opts to raise their concerns over the situation. I shall try to elaborate the matter further.
On one hand, restricting teenagers by curfew after a set time without adult, might be essential for their safety. It is evident that darkness is best in favour of criminals and for illegal activities. So, teenagers might indulge in such activities who are given an opertunity to stay out of home till late night hours. In other case, they may be a victim of a crime as well. Another best thing with the concept is that parent could be able to keep an eye over their children, specifically when they go outside.
On the other hand, this practice may lead to cause of confidence lacking in growing adults. Teenagers might be more dependant over their parent. Furthermore a sense of fear can possibly develop in their inconsciousness. Additionally, this kind of setup can possibly result in lacking of social skills- that might develop better in an independant environment. Besides sometimes teenagers take the restrictions negatively and thus to impose curfew on their activities, however for a specific short time, may result in producing depression that could influence their studies and health too.
In conclusion, while teenagers might be imposed restrictions for a specific hours considering their well being, the implications of the restrictions might be deleterious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16153846154 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88666593784 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9324032864 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15914948427 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549621095106 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420726769829 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949184660821 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488225866157 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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