Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think there are lots of negative effects for children, and should banned it. Give your opinion, to what extent you agree or disagree.
In contempotary society, a large amount of is aimed at children and some people feel that it should be banned. however, I absolutely disagree with the aforementioned reason and I will explain more briefly in this essay.
To begin, according to one study publish in UK famous magazine "Times" has reavealed this fact, the number of that opted to use children's a primary actor of their play belongs to sugary drink and fast foof which fascinates many viewer to develop such aunhealthy habits of eating. Additionally, allow to early come many of diseases such as obesity, high blood pressure and diabetes. Besides, another study has shown that the number of patients have been seen who scrambled to the hospital due to teeth delay after consuming a huge amount of sweet chocolate which was very famous youngsters.
In addition, branded products to children can have a negative influence on parent- child relationship. For instance, if children see some cool Nike shoes in commercials, they want one and ask their parents to buy it for them. however, their parents may not be doing well finacially and thus refuse their request, which would lead to arguments.
Taking everything into consideration, not only makes young generations more demanding, but also may convey wrong information to growing child. Therefore, I strongly feel that these should be banned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, briefly, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22072072072 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86220413017 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698198198198 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8013534886 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164126193461 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668153089467 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951522896164 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101962938121 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887276991333 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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