Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?
With the recent advancements in technology, business meetings are mostly taking place online using softwares ranging from Skype to MeetingsPro rather than traditional face-to-face discussions. I think this trend has more advantages such as saving of precious time and money than disadvantages. (Opinion clearly stated using More X than Y construction.
Online business interaction is extremely useful in saving the time of team members and they can use this time for other important things. Earlier, employees used to spend most of their time traveling from one place to another for business meetings. With the advent of technology, they can save this time and use it for improving client satisfaction or operational efficiency. Moreover, use of technology for business meetings reduces the overall cost for companies. This curtails the cost of travel along with the money spent on building meeting rooms. For instance, Google has recently eliminated all space meant for meetings and the company has reported a 4 percent reduction in the cost of doing business merely because of this change.
On the other hand, this trend has a few disadvantages. Online meetings prevent members from developing a spirit of brotherhood and doing teamwork to achieve organizational goals. One corporate survey has revealed that through online meetings reduce the cost of doing business in the short term, it reduces revenue in the long term since the employees fail to work together to improve client satisfaction.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, despite several disadvantages of online meetings, I strongly believe that advantages are more prominent. If all business meetings are shifted from personal interaction, this will not only reduce the cost of doing business but also improve work efficiency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51449275362 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11648124758 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6530400512 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219613007727 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881294246549 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386773302229 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152581088432 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392315214636 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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