Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities, is it a positive or negative development? Do you think the advantage of this outweigh it's disadvantages.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, the trend of migrating in mega cities for education and employment is gaining prevalence day by day. Here, I would like to account that it is a positive development.
There are manifold benefits of this phenomenon. First and foremost, masses can become responsible and independent by staying in mega cities. To illustrate, people have to manage all the personal outlays such as paying electricity bills, accommodation, tuition fee and many others while studying or doing jobs in urban areas. Therefore, they become mature and realize the value of money. Apart from it, people can get distinct job opportunities in urban cities. These opportunities helps masses to reduce the poverty of family. Moreover, folks can relish numerous activities such as watching movies, shopping, outing with friends and many others. Such activities are impossible under the presence of parents in rural areas. Thus, migrating in urban cities is lucrative for people. On the other side, it has darker side too.
To begin with, people who leave homes for education and work are unable to create harmonious bondings with family. They can not share ideas and feelings with family members. Further, sometimes masses feel homesickness when they live in mega cities and faces many health problems. Hence, leaving homes for education and work does not fully holds the water.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, there are some demerits of leaving rural areas. However, still I believe that the advantages outweigh it's disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, apart from, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39919354839 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76634944575 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653225806452 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1677562621 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4736842105 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0526315789 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165318620012 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421497338315 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414163874795 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949748976485 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525105295694 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.15 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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