some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them. others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Gifts are called the token of love and care.presently, some proportion of masses assert that the best way to depict love and care towards our parents and friends is give them gifts and presents. By contrast, others say that our affection and respect for our family and friends are more important than gifts. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, a person can make his relationship strong by giving gifts and presents. For example, sometimes people are unable to show their love and intimacy for their family and friends but with the help of gifts they can depict their lives very and care for their parents and friends. Thus, giving gifts is lucrative for everyone. Apart from it, through gifts we can make our near and dear happy.To illustrate, in some special occasion such as birthday party, marriage and many more people give gifts in order to make their near and dear happy. Therefore, the idea of giving gifts fully holds the water.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, care is essential for our friends and family instead of gifts. To be specific, people can help their friends in their thick and thin situation, they can respect their parents, give them proper time, share their spare time with family and doing all these a person can not only show their love for family bot also make their relation good for long life. Thus, care is imperative rather than gifts.
To recapitulate, both the points have their own significant. However,still believe that respect and care is more important because it is real thing.
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also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86315789474 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33499215537 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512280701754 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3199091017 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281297316714 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956209261608 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439586773988 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18084582123 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611560035094 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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