Offering gifts have become a tradition, nowadays, in most of the developed countries. While many people believe that presents reflect emotions and love for our closed ones, I promote the inclusion of some other encouraging ways in which we can show care and strengthen our relationships.
The supporters of gifts put forth several benefits of following this idea. They emphasise on the happiness that it brings when our special ones are not around. Children and teenager, in particular, become joyful when they see games and toys, for example, gifted by their friends who moved to different locations. The innovative ways in which a collage, for instance, is made with many photos, shows the effort that a companion has invested, especially to make someone feel special. Furthermore, these days, people have started helping impoverished families by catering education-related gifts where the older generation offers books related to science, literature and history.
Conversely, in my perspective, there are numerous issues experienced by the young generation these days such as solitude, depression and a feeling of resentment. These individuals require continuous time, attention and commitment as a form of care from their parents and friends. On occasions like Anniversaries, birthdays and marriages, our mates send expensive offerings rather than being available either due to their busy schedule or unwillingness to travel far distances. Such behaviours lead to the weakening of relationships which are commonly observed in the current era. Most of the people treat these tangible gifts irrelevant and see it as a formality for the sake of saving the relationship. In these scenarios, people’s presence is the most aspired pillar that is necessary to improve interpersonal skills, which is seldom seen in society.
In conclusion, while gifts undoubtedly have specific benefits in improving our relationships, I opine individual’s continuous-time and attention as a token of care that is essential to have a prosperous and contented life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...as invested, especially to make someone feel special. Furthermore, these days, peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57006369427 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23209498458 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2345968847 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131896420641 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394246112937 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483354272304 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866815886527 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622610275831 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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