It is irrefutable that giving gifts and presents often emphasises the care and love for the person. Similarly, it is considered by many that in order to show some care, it is essential to give presents to the friends and families. On the contrary, other individuals think that it can be shown by the other fine ways as well. In my opinion, gifts plays a immense role for describing the care about the other person, but also, there are various ways to show the affection. Further, this essay will discuss both the views.
First and foremost method to show some care is to spending time with your friends and family. However, every person wants to spend some time with their loved ones and thus, this can be significant way to showcase their care for them. For instance, my parents always want me to spend some precious time with them, which gives them tremendous amount of happiness and satisfaction. Secondly, helping can also be most noticeable factor and primary feature to expose the care. It means that , if a person is in a need of anything, you should go and support them just to make them feel more protective and supportive.
On the other hand, giving surprises in terms of gifts and presents showcases the love and affection for the mates and menage. For example, on a birthday or any other special day of particular individual, you can expose your care towards him/her through strucking with an amazement.
To conclude, although, offering presents and gifts, you can illustrate your affection towards mates and menage, by contrast, there are several methods as well which shows the care. In my view, an individual should provide little amount of time with their loved ones and also should support them in their difficult times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83946488294 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4758275833 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1434729007 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352881337501 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125993278626 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620799771653 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211949600545 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884138076115 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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