Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
School sets the foundation of sucessful career. Presently, majority of masses believe that it is necessary for adolescent to study in school until the age of eighteen. Here, I would like to agree with the statement at larger extent.
Manifold points are there to support my point of view. First and foremost, staying in school before 18 is fruitful for children to light the pressure. To illustrate, between 14 to 18 children's harmonus and physical changes make them more irritated and frustrated. Moreover, parents put pressure of everything on them. Therefore, spending quality time with friends in school help children to reduce the stress of study and other things.Moreover, children are immature before 18. They can easily indulge in bad deeds such as drinking, smoking and many others. Thus, juveniles can save themselves from bad company if they spend most of their time in school under the age of eighteen.
Further emphasising on my point of view . School is suppose to be the best place for adolescent to sharp academic and other skills.for example, children can easily learn academic and other curricular activities such as painting, dancing and many others. Apart from it, teachers confer numerous supreme traits such as punctual, discipline, ettiquets and many other. Children can also enhance their confidence by participating in quizz, speech competition. As a result, teenagers can achieve over all development before eighteen by learning in school.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, there is no specific age for learning. However, still I believe that school is the fabulous place for making children noble character.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35271317829 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83718900996 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2224296318 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148879023772 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481699923517 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539893635014 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106899578694 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725642394516 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.