Nowadays many job seekers are finding jobs that force them to move far from their family and friends. Is it a positive or a negative trend? What can be done about it?
In this recent decade, people especially adults, tend to find appropriate jobs far from their home town and it leads to many drastic problems for them. However, some of them are so ambitious and want to follow their dreams and risk to gain to them. In this essay, I will discuss and give my opinion about this issue.
It is certainly obvious, finding a job in other city makes a wide range of problems for people. One of the most important problems is depression. A recent study published by Stanford University indicates more than 67 percent of people who immigrate to other cities for finding a suitable job bother about depression. For instance, in underdeveloped country such as Iran, people have to move to the capital and they usually cannot find their dream jobs. To tackle on this problem, governments should prepare different situation and amenities all over their countries and encourage people to stay their home town.
On the other hand, wealthy people who manage factories can have an important role. They can build their factories in various cities and it leads to increasing job situation in all these cities. By growing job situations people’s incomes will be augmented and they tend to stay in their home town.
All in all, although there is no doubt that people immigrate to a new city or country to achieve better life, I think they usually miss several valuable things such as their family and their parents and it has irreparable effects on their mind and soul. However, they make effort to chase their dreams and the dreams make their hopes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, i think, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85130111524 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48821381138 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0201372024 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223732299256 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825857965531 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536133337689 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141647785713 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426133156412 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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