Nowadays many people cannot read or write What problems does this cause What measures can governments take to solve these problems

Essay topics:

Nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measures can governments take to solve these problems?

Although it is apparent that our world has been developed day by day, it has a significant number of citizens who are illiterate. While this problem brings about many negative impacts, governments can alleviate it in some ways.

Illiteracy nowadays can be responsible for two results. Firstly, people who are stuck in the inability to read and write would confront legal problems. It is clear that if a person cannot read or write, this also means that he cannot protect his own legitimate rights by themselves. Secondly, illiteracy is really an stumbling block in modern life. For example, if a citizen cannot understand economic contracts, they could not reach a consensus, in other words, they are incapable of running their own business.

However, governments can diminish this circumstance by two panaceas. One of the solutions is that authorities should leverage international subsidies to improve education. Although it is clear that economic development should be high on governments’ agenda, governments should allocate resources to provide more literacy classes and ensure basic education for everyone. In other remedy, governments should take media into account of raising people’s awareness about the significance of literacy. For example, authorities should impose more policies on news coverage to carry more stories which encourage education.

In conclusion, it is undoubted that many people nowadays are still illiterate, which is a culprit for many problems. However, the governments can control these problems by many remedies.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60337552743 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0595983833 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2137002298 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242020616988 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842143460122 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861167252843 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150409855339 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566868241049 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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