It goes without saying in this more complicated and sophisticated world we live, choosing the best place to work is a critical decision to make for everyone. While some people prefer to have a secure job in a company, others state that running a good business might be abetter idea. I think that both sides have compelling reasons, and I will discuss them in this essay.
First of all, there are several reasons why people prefer to take a risk and instead of opting for a lifetime, secure and income-stable job, try to start their own business. To some extent, it goes back to some environmental situations. For example, most time companies and organizations have a deadline to complete a project that brings about severe pressure on staff. In addition, while these extra works have no boundaries or a little, hardly ever can they be stimulating or exciting. One of the other most important factors that encourage people to start a new business for themselves is related to time. In other words, it completely depends on themselves to spend the amount of time in every project without obligation to spend all day in company building.
However, self-employing has its drawbacks. Insurance and promotions are two momentous incentives which given to staff of a company. So, not only do self-employed people deprive of these privileges but their income always directly depended on clients.
So although it is a common belief that working for yourself reduces stress and anxiety, in some circumstances, it can even increase them because of instability in income.
In conclusion, I believe that while several common difficulties like workplace pressure, the heavy task with little reward causes people to think to set up their own business, some financial problems could discourage them.
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- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 84
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 56
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 81
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09863945578 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87508337287 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8171276236 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193960371307 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582137812109 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442262539644 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896255056224 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472438230258 0.056905535591 83% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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