nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. what are the advantage and disadvantage of this
In recent days, the traditional way of cooking at home has decreased as people are attracted by readymade food. This passage deals with both the merits and demerits of this scenario before arriving at a conclusion.
To set in, modern world pushes people to work all around the clock. They have stressful jobs and hectic schedules where they don’t find much time for cooking. The introduction of fast food grabbed attention from all the directions and people tend to rely on them as they spend most of the time in working. It is said that around 75% of the people depend on fast food and other readymade food. For instance, bachelors who moved to urban cities for profession may not have a proper knowledge in cooking as a result they become more dependent on these readymade foods.
However, readymade food has its own consequences. People started to rely on these food resulting in high demand and low quality of these food. In order to attain more profit , restaurants started to use cheap quality products for cooking which affects the people’s immune system because the food they eat may be contagious and can have adverse effects. For instance, eating low standard meals could result in diarrhea or food poison which affects day to day activities of human and thus become less productive.
To conclude, it is commonly said that “Health is wealth”. Even though readymade food has its own advantages ,it is better to take a step forward and cook food at home as health is equally important as time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'proper knowledge'.
Suggestion: proper knowledge
...rban cities for profession may not have a proper knowledge in cooking as a result they become more...
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...consequences. People started to rely on these food resulting in high demand and low qualit...
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...lting in high demand and low quality of these food. In order to attain more profit , resta...
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Suggestion: ,
...ese food. In order to attain more profit , restaurants started to use cheap qualit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in diarrhea or food poison which affects day to day activities of human and thus...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, thus, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90733590734 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61837781209 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3614561396 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215594801188 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831600947135 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681656885204 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150591927618 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577696875988 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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