Nowadays men s sports are given far more attention by society compared to women s sports what are the reasons for that Do you think is a positive or a negative development

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Nowadays men's sports are given far more attention by society compared to women's sports.what are the reasons for that?Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

Sports is a thing which important for all the people in the world and also developing strength of public. But presently, human beings given more support to male sports than female sports. This essay analyze the causes of this phenomenon and effect of it on the development. I, personally feel that it could have negative effects of the growth of society.

To begin with, people think that women should work only at home as a housewife and grow their children. Hence, female could not living independently and can not earn money with themselves. Therefore, women can not get their fame in the society. Moreover, government give less opportunity to women sports and do not send to other countries for play tournament as well as show their talent. Thus, government think that only men sports get fame.

Furthermore, many schools and colleges have not sports sector and no any sports subject for students. Hence, girls have not get sports training and do not take part in any sports game. To addition to it, some parents responsible for this because of they believe that girls do not play better sport than boys and they teach only house work for their future after marriage . Therefore, girls can not get chance for participate in sports.

This reasons are given some negative effects on the growth of society. First of all, this effect on sports quota of their country that country's women sports are extinct and do not get value among all the countries in women's sports. Second, is that growth of women have been decreasing in the society or the world level.

To recapitulate, government and all the people should give support to women's sports for economically growth of their country as well as schools and colleges should provide sports facilities to all the students.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91362126246 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46141443646 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485049833887 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2788427689 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23094967873 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802302880073 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406595390947 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133771396839 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299385725066 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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